dementia video feedback

Dementia video feedback

After my first video was posted on here and on you tube i have received feedback from Lawrence and peers on how to improve it :

• DIALOGUE
• AUDIO QUALITY 
• IMAGES 
• SONG AT THE END 
• THE FONT
• THE FADING BETWEEN EACH SECTION 
• FACTS TOO HARSH 
• CHANGE THE N OF DEMENTIA FROM NURSING TO NURTURING 

  DIALOGUE - the dialogue is not clear and not entirely related to the individual letter. Also the dialogue was a bit depressing and not what i wanted which is to be happy and informative.

AUDIO QUALITY -the quality of the sound is not very crisp ans sharp it had background noise and clicks which are the start of the recording.

IMAGES- the images are rushed the quality is not up to standard also the last image showing agitated is complete different to the other so it doesn't appear cohesive.They don't all fit the frame , some are on too long and don't really say anything. also some images like the illness one where there is lots of pills on table appears depressing.

SONG AT THE END - the end song by Nickel back called Photograph even though it fits it is too harsh for the piece as it suddenly comes in at the end and doesn't really fit the target market which is the older generation.

THE FONT -times new Roman is a font that looks too harsh and stands out too much on the page also the letter on its own looks amateurish so the full word should be displayed 

THE FADING- the fading is too quick it should be slower to represent the mind of a dementia sufferer fading.

FACTS- the facts at the end are too harsh and come across as daunting and scary as they are statistics that also come across as cold. 

N LETTER - the N for nursing makes the audience feel bad and worried for the future as the dialogue states that one will have to become a nurse which could really worry carers watching this campaign